IELTS WRITING BAND 9 || HOW TO WRITE DOUBLE QUESTION ESSAY || ASAD YAQUB



bismillahirrahmanirrahim assalamualaikum my name is Asad yaqoob and I am from Lahore Pakistan once again I welcome you guys to my IELTS video and this is essay writing video if you have not subscribed my channel as yet please hit the subscribe button and click the bell icon so that whenever I upload a video you get to know about that in this video I am going to share rather I am going to analyze some essays which are for been school eight or been score nine now will read the topic together will analyze the topic together and then I'm going to read complete essay including introduction body of the essay and conclusion and this exercise will help you I mean these sentences can go to your subconscious mind and you will be able to understand how eight main essays are written how nine banned essays are written what soft sort of vocabulary is used and all that stuff so now let's take a start you can see the topic explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment now that's the main topic sentence explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment what can government's do to address these problems what can individual people do now it's a double question essay and there are three parts of it part one explains some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment so you will write one paragraph on that chicken what can government's do to address these problems now you're going to suggest the government or what is the responsibility of government that is the second paragraph second body paragraph and third what can individual people do that is the third paragraph so it means there are three paragraphs in the body introduction and conclusion there will be total five paragraphs now let's write introduction first humans are responsible for a variety of environmental problems but we can also take steps to reduce the damage that we are causing to the planet this is a general sentence about the topic this essay will discuss environmental problems and the measures their governments and individuals can take to address these problems now this is the sentence where you are telling that reader your plan what you are going to write in this essay so it's a simple two sentence introduction now in the next paragraph we are going to cover some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment two of the biggest threats to the environment are air pollution and wastes gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles lead to global warming which may have a devastating effect on the planet in the future clear as the human population increases we are also producing ever greater quantities of wastes which contaminates the earth and pollutes rivers and oceans now what was the part explains some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment their part is covered over here now in the next paragraph we are going to cover what can government's do to address these problems governments could certainly make more effort to reduce air pollution they could introduce laws to limit emissions from factories or to force companies to use renewable energy from solar wind and wind or water power they could also impose green taxes on drivers and airline companies in this way people would be encouraged to use public transport and to take fewer flights abroad therefore reducing emissions now in the next paragraph we are going to cover what can individual people do let's start individuals should also take responsibility for the impair they have on the environment they can take public transport rather than driving choose products with less packaging and recycle as much as possible most supermarkets now provide reusable bags for shoppers as well as banks for recycling glass plastic and paper in their car parks by reusing and recycling we can help to reduce wastes now the last paragraph conclusion in conclusion both national governments in conclusion both national governments and individuals must play their part in looking after the environment now see there isn't anything like first of all secondly moreover furthermore very simple to the point si and this si can get 8 to 9 bands quite easily clear this is just the first si if you'd like this video please tell me comment and tell me or request me to make more videos on more essays like opinion discussion problem solution and all that this is also my new experiment if you like this experiment and you guys want me to make more videos please write a comment and give me your feedback because I always read your comments and I always try to follow your feedback and then I make videos accordingly so thank you very much don't forget to subscribe my channel I teach I else online if you want to join my online knowledge classes my whatsapp number is given you can contact me for that essentia cope wishes you all the best with your IELTS writing take good care of yourselves Allah Hafiz

24 thoughts on “IELTS WRITING BAND 9 || HOW TO WRITE DOUBLE QUESTION ESSAY || ASAD YAQUB

  1. Nice ,Sir could you please make a video for brainstorming./rough note .
    It will get an idea about how to construct the essay.
    Thanks indeed.and God bless you
    I hope you will make it soon

  2. Sir ,This writting is very effactive .so, Please make it more for interduce to us and can we use in this essay we ?

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